Monday, December 30, 2019

Window Comments

Rating: 5.0

To liberate yourself
from nightmares passed
you pulled the curtain of the window
which looks out on another world-
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Soran M. H
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Terry Craddock 19 September 2020

'waiting for a breeze to ripple your lonely pool, You folded like a candle burning for itself' resonates in my memory, reminding of some of my earliest poems, a wonderful write, wonderful memories

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Soran M. H 11 August 2020

Thanks Rose for such amazing comments and idea; but as you know the space always expanding, always there are some points remaining closed to us we can't reach them, even if we are free and in an open air, , but you are right there are many people in the 21st century struggling for the basic freedom

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

Despite of our determination and persistence and struggles we are doomed to be in caged leading to nothingness. A thought provoking poem so brilliantly penned. Superb imagery as always. I concur with the wonderful comments of Sir Anniruddha. Beautiful closure lines. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

I like the title of this poem. So appropriate for the theme freedom. Sometimes fate does not allow us to extricate ourselves from unfortunate circumstances that pin us to where we at and never attain our freesom.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

Another excellent write on life. Every fiber of this marvelous poem speaks of the desire for freedom yet to no avail. So poignant and deeply moving.

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

Dear Susan my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope all is well with you and those around you. your lovely comment is the best gift I have ever had... Keep writing and stay blessed

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Susan Williams 27 July 2020

I came back and read this poem again and found more layers of life interwoven with layers of unhappy truths but the final response to it is that it cannot stop itself from having a lonely off the beaten track kind of beauty.. This is a masterpiece of writing. 10++++++++ if I am allowed to score it again!

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Soran M. H 15 February 2020

Thanks so much Dear poet Aniruddha Pathak for your time has spent to read my humble poem and wrote this wonderful comment..I hope yo enjoyed it...Regards

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 February 2020

Beautifully rendered philosophical poem, dear poet, and what a brilliant ending! Kudos.

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Kesav Easwaran 21 January 2020

All our sense organs are opened to outside. Beautiful imagery. Enjoyed your well written piece

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Soran M. H 21 January 2020

Dear kesav...I am glad you are enjoying this poem..many thanks for your nice comment..have a nice time with reading the origional poems...kind regards

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2020

Liberation! ! ! Muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 20 January 2020

Thanks dear famous poet Edward

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Anjandev Roy 01 January 2020

Brilliant piece.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Soran M. H 01 January 2020

thanks for your nice comment dear friend poet Roy, wish you all the best....

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Susan Williams 31 December 2019

You folded like a candle burning for itself. - - - -> Those lines are awesomely beautiful and touch your readers's souls with mystery and whispers of the spiritual world. Thank you very much for sharing this gem with PH. 10++++++

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Spock The Vegan 30 December 2019

" Your eyes become two tired pigeons that not had flown in freedom; the storm had broken their wings, " Great imagery. Keep them coming.

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Soran M. H 31 December 2019

very nice comment appreciating it so much, thank you for having time to read this poem, Kind Regards

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Shaun Cronick 30 December 2019

I totally agree with Leeann Azzopardi's well said and heart-felt comments. When we feel imprisoned by our own sometimes foolish and selfish thoughts shall we embrace a warm freedom in the poetry of our own hearts and that of others. Thank you Soran for this great poem. 10++ and added to my treasure chest.

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Soran M. H 30 December 2019

Many Thanks Dear Shaun for your amazing comment, I find it full of energy for me and giving my pen more power and encouragement to write better...Regards

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Leeann Azzopardi 30 December 2019

So true that we need pure freedom Only in poetry we find it Bravo!

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Soran M. H 30 December 2019

well done exactly that is our real world, every thing there are perfect, cheers Dear poet for your nice comment.

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