Tuesday, July 16, 2019

Window Comments

Rating: 0.0

There's a spirit behind the window
Agile, bewildered and restless
Directionless it moves, vague and senseless
It's made of all hues and shades
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Sunil Shandilya
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Mehak anand 29 July 2019

Trapped its feet, branches are free. Beautiful lines

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2019

NICE SPIRITTY POETRY BUT SPIRITS HAVE NO APPLES TWO NOR A BANANA NOR A WELL SEXLESS SO RETHINK POET YE KNOW UR HUMANELY SiLent noises he? ? ? ? tries to convey SPIRITS DON'T INDULGE IN SO HOLD WHAT O POET NO POLES NO POT

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Sunil Shandilya 23 July 2019

Thanks for the review again sir, that spirit is me, myself, looking through the windowpane, as i saw my reflection in it.

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