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Window of life opens
and a smile on Ocean’s face
waves bang all around,
dawn pleasant and calm
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stiking imagery, heart rending- unusual imagery- impressive.
angry waves disguised in smile banging on your poem window...window calm? introspective...good 10/10
I agree with Mr.Ramesh as war and violence have become an usual trend.Pray for world peace.10 and more
World happenings we watch from the window But we can't help as we are in fetters by fate!
this is a classy poem and you see let waves bang you write for me.. i like this one 10 and more writing this Gai
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7/19/2025 4:23:41 AM # 1.0.0
A nice poem with wonderful metaphors. Love it.