Tuesday, December 4, 2007

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As I watch you
suffering
I cry in the rain
so no one can see my pain
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Efrain Leyva 08 August 2009

great poem it's make mee cry! ! ! good work! ! !

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all of your poems are short but really good. you're able to express yourself in only a couple lines and not alot of people can do that.

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Tyease Collins 23 June 2008

I wish i was whoever you wrote this for. So much emotion and just...death in it. Lovely

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

maybe they cry because you cry so why not stop the crying for other people will cry too i am an empath so i will cry to

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