Sunday, September 4, 2016

Windmill Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wind breathes upon the tall sails,
Which take the weight and creak
Into slow rotation,
And as the breeze strengthens
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Tom Billsborough
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Wes Vogler 06 September 2016

Pictured well. Tom You have descriptive powers Do some more.

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Tom Billsborough 07 September 2016

Thanks, Wes. Think I'm an Imagist at heart. Very much into Ezra Pound when I was young and Chinese poetry. Maybe I'm just an old fashioned guy.

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Greg Davidson 04 September 2016

An enjoyable read and a nice ending rhyme

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Tom Billsborough 05 September 2016

Thanks, Greg. Read a few of yours yesterday. Liked very much! The odd message below refers to the fact that no messages came up originally, just a weird message about a Microsoft error!

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Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

what's all that about below

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Laurie Van Der Hart 04 September 2016

Thank you for this vivid image, Tom, giving us bread for Sunday breakfast and food for thought...!

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Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

Thanks Laurie. Nice to hear from our man in Prague! In my day we had to use a sort of ferry to cross to the Zoo. I suppose that like everything else has changed, though I hear the beer is still cheap.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 September 2016

Some things you see With clarity But some you must imagine Working deep within our minds Beautiful poem, nicely written. Thanks for the sharing.10 for it. Subhas

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Tom Billsborough 04 September 2016

Thanks, Subhas. When this site settles down I'll get back to some reading. Love your poems.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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