Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Winding Roads Comments

Rating: 4.0

I found the paths leading down to the waters edge just like the brochure described.
The rushing sound was penetrating as it ran over rocks leading downward into the stream.

I stepped into the stream barefooted feeling the tickling between my toes.
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Marsha Cleveland
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Rajeev Deshpande 28 July 2013

You dared to leave the popular path to find your secret place. Bravo! Beautifully worded.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 July 2013

Absolutely stunning! What a vivid description of the beauty you looked for and the beauty you found. Loved your note about the poem too. Brilliant work.

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