Friday, March 9, 2007

Wind Whispers Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the wind whispers 'what might have been',
And brings forth your face from the past,
I can forget thoughts of anything else on my mind,
But the love that I hoped would last,
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Vallerie Lobell
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Sameer Ahmed 05 July 2009

A very warm shaping of olden memories in a flowing patterns of the wind that can soak through the hearts and spill the liquid of remembrances anytime if one is attracted to the Nature.

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Pamela Lutwyche 13 September 2008

What a lovely poem. so true to life.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 March 2008

love is blazed best by the remniscence still deeper when wakes the tear from eyes as the deepest when it whispers ever-..........really poignant and hurtful when lying lonely across the remniscence, great poem,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 March 2008

I've got to say, that you are one of the best writers of rhythm and rhyme I've read so far. R&R writers are hard to find, and good ones are rare indeed. Count me as a fan, you're on my list, I'll be back. GW62

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Original Unknown Girl 09 March 2007

Vallerie, I know these feelings, especially the saving the voice, such a haunting reminder but sometimes we feel compelled to plut ourselves through the pain of listening. A very personal poem but so eloquently put. HG: -) xx

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Anand Shankar 09 March 2007

gosh! its painful! Nice poem frend

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