Sunday, May 4, 2008

Wind When Betides Comments

Rating: 5.0

goodbye when poignant in the valley of the tunes
morning never be the wishing by the tea cup
breeze when passes by the desire for trudging the top hill
hope yet slakes by the swing to touch moon or the sea
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Dr subhendu kar
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Sameer Ahmed 05 July 2009

A very touching poem. The soothing pattern of wind is indeed the one of the most wonderful peculiarity of The Mother Nature and it shapes us so refinely that we comeup with several thoughts and idealogies that otherwise stay astray in our minds and fail to reveal. The ending is just splendid and shows the wisdom, respect and honour you have in context of those who fight for the dignity of their land......10/10

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Thad Wilk 04 May 2008

This poem is really touching and very well executed Dr. Kar! History will still love the brave soldiers, that fight the game! So true! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Ian Bowen 04 May 2008

Nice poem, well penned. Ian

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