Thursday, April 3, 2014

Wind Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the waves violently crashed against the white seashore
An invisible but quite ferocious wind still blows forever more
Its mighty power rises up and stretches like a rushing wonder
She held back her reckless visage then only seemed to ponder
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Patricia Grantham
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* Sunprincess * 27 May 2014

...........reading this poem a second time was a must....it is truly beautiful and I love the title also....enjoyed...

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

Perfect rhyme and perfect music. Voted 10

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Chuy Amante 17 April 2014

Wow! I loved it. I seem to resonate with all good poems written about the sea! Especially this one, Written by Thee! !

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Khairul Ahsan 13 April 2014

I could hear the song of your poem that beautifully narrates the fearsome fury of the raging winds, as also I could hear the prayers of the seafarers and their families for their well being. 'Its mighty power rises up and stretches like a rushing wonder She held back her reckless visage then only seemed to ponder - very well expressed! 'Relentless winds that never cease is out of the seafarers control Caught in its fearsome currents may God have mercy on their soul' - A vivid picture. 'Its forces begins to diminish then the water becomes calm again Wistful songs will forever be heard but none will ever know when' - A glimmer of hope for peace and calmness. A magnificent poem.10/10.

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A sweet and satisfying song that soothes the poetic soul. Well done my friend!

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Spiritual Seeker 10 April 2014

Man and sea...unseparable! The spirit of adventure...the wildness, uncertainty, rewards, are too great to ignore. Beautiful write Caught in its fearsome currents may God have mercy on their soul...in the terrible storm they will remember God in their heart, when delivered to safety, they will forget! ...often... a great 10.

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Amitava Sur 08 April 2014

A lovely poem detailing the wildness of nature, here in the form of wild wind. As if I was observing the wildness by the sea side with your nice flow of words.... that too ending with a hope of calmness... very nice

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Hazel Durham 08 April 2014

A song that dances with the force of the wind and the sea, capturing it's wildness, strength and the bravery of the people who sail in all it's magnificent, deadly splendour! ! Stunning write! !

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Valsa George 07 April 2014

'Wistful songs will forever be heard but none will ever know when'..... So true! Sea winds are ever a threat to seafarers especially to the fishermen.... No one has control over them but God! At times a hurricane in the height of its fury may suddenly calm itself down.... may be the effect of prayerful eyes directed to the Heavens! A great write... Pat!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 April 2014

We pray for calmness of the wind to make the sea quiet. Let the boat of people come safely to the shore. Wonderful words. Nice to see your beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Anna Boukna 06 April 2014

very powerful words used there you have an amazing talent!

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

a lovely song dear...............may god have mercy on soul...amen..............bien.......

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Suman Kumar Das 03 April 2014

May God have mercy on their soul.......................wonderful write...............liked it

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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