Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Wind On My Face Comments

Rating: 4.8

The feel of wind on my face
it barrels cold down on me
as I struggle with my pace
trotting the gentle slope
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Seema Jayaraman
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Melvina Germain 05 December 2015

Aww yes a lovely thing to do, out enjoying the breath and beauty of nature and that feeling of coolness from the touch of the wind, ummm how much more refreshing can life be. Amazing and soul touching poem Seema.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2015

Wind blows with imagery and touches face frequently. Wind too creates the race of life. Uplifting collapsing sail wind takes this life ahead. wind kisses with love and greet more and more. Very beautiful imagery is drawn and this is definitely a fantastic poem shared. Interesting. A rating of 10 is done for you in rating box.

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M Asim Nehal 18 November 2015

Very true at times it happens and one should not give up instead keep trying, the morning walk, run is so refreshing and the wind that touches our cheek is so cool and refreshing.....Really a nice poem with great imagery, Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem.

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