Thursday, September 3, 2020

Wind Of Changes Comments

Rating: 3.5

Wind of changes

Lucky I was to find me brother
In Mazar, Afghans...
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 September 2020

Great one my brother. I can see the movie in my mind. Your style and power of evoking enotion is unique. I have been to Afghanistan through your poem. Great stuff.

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Denis Mair 03 September 2020

Your story is heart-warming, but also bittersweet. What lovely lines you wrote: FELT BEING HOME, AFGHAN, / IN A HOUSE MADE OF HEARTS... I HAVE LOST MY NEST TO THE CHANGES. // This could only have been written by someone who found friendship while living through terrible turmoil.

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