Life changes quick as a breeze-
Blowing backward through painted porcelain trees
The fake foilage unaware
Of such mighty and mysterious air
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, I like it Smoky, and I like your new scheme. It comes natural to you. Don't abandon your other style completely, you are good at both, you are growing as a poet very rapidly.
I too like your new format. Yeah. Have you read mine - We the Unencumbered -? Adeline