Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Wind In The Afternoon Comments

Rating: 4.8

An assault of cabbage leaves on the pavement
Tries vainly to cover up the manholes;
Splattered egg yolk on the serrated kerb:
Two men look from the window. Wind blows.
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan
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Yash Shinde 17 March 2014

....very interesting....somehow a deep poem...which requires you to read between the lines.......an incident, beautifully, n a bit humorously described....great wrk...

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Powerful pieces that put the puzzle into poetic perspective. Well done my friend!

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Patricia Grantham 11 November 2013

A very interesting poem indeed Dr. Pradham. Your observation of some of the things that happens in life is full of details. Your poem has a lot of sense of humor in it. But underneath it all there lies a truth in the human existence and its downfall. Another womans trash is another mans treasure. (smile) . Enjoyed this write.

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Sarah Jones 03 September 2013

The poem made me think. rather disturbed me a lot. More than poem, I read notes given by the poet. Symbolism behind poem is extraordinary. It is almost a spiritual poem (?) although describes mundane things like tea cartons and that thing....

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Prem Surya Kumar 21 August 2013

Superbly crafted poem. Loved the poet's comments on the symbolism and the imagery. Surprising to see the poem has hidden meaning in yoga theory. I do not understand yoga. But poem in itself is quite captivating and extremely original. From first line to last, poem creates suspense. Ending surprising and unpredictable. Poet is able to compose a poem out of a stained sanitary napkin! Hats off, Dr! !

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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan

Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan

Bhubaneswar, Odisha, India
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