I am forgotten and alone,
with only my memorys for friends,
I hear the wind outside whistle and grone,
shall I go back and make amends?
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your poem was excellent.i really loved it.the rhyme scheme matches with the theme too.please read my poem 'The Tsunami' and see if u like it. i am just 12 and need your valuable comments
Truly magic and wonderfully woven lines in a poem I'd personally dare to call from now one of my favourites; the sentiments of a human soul's clicking in a link with nature all around, to the point of hearing the very voices for the Cosmic Dance.
A very well written sonnet, with a perfect rhyming couplet at the end, Bravo. Chantelle