Friday, November 18, 2016

Wind (Emily Translated To Senryu) Comments

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wind

feels mighty at morn
showing all the brand new dawn
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Wes Vogler 21 November 2016

I have just discovered you. Surely this is a haiku rather than a senryu series (nature) Are you a proponent of 'no levity' in haiku to respect the Japanese attitude? I had to cancel quite a few when I discovered this basic rule. I think senryu is okay. nicely done, by the way.

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R Soos 21 November 2016

My basic belief is no labels. I fought for over 30 years with haiku nazis, now I'm old enough to ignore them. I kinda like the term Senryu, which I've seen translated as human haiku. Of course, with my rebellious nature, I define human differently than the sticklers =: -) I'm from the whitman school of poetics, and tend to see everything up for experimentation and enjoyment of the words rather than an argument over form =: -) Thanks for stopping by & commenting! - Rich

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R Soos 21 November 2016

Ahh - after writing my reply I visited your site & your poem & your 'levity' question makes more sense. I am wholeheartedly a proponent of levity in haiku & have a disdain for the nazis who make up rules on the spot and say otherwise =: -) I'd love to read your levity haiku, and I will now retire to my palacy.

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