Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Wind Dancer Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I stand outside and breathe in.
They are such calm, cool, soothing breaths.
My lungs fill with the damp kissed air.
My hair is teased by the quiet breeze.
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Chelsea Crisman
memory soothing
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Peter Stavropoulos 17 April 2012

I enjoyed this poem. Just wondering if you gave away too much with using the last two words as your title. There's a lot to be said for no title. Best wishes.

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Chelsea Crisman

Chelsea Crisman

Oklahoma
Chelsea Crisman
Chelsea Crisman
Oklahoma
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