As sun rose in the early dawn
And skies were lit with gold,
I saw the clouds go passing by
And watched my dreams unfold,
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A lovely poem which has a magic rythmn. Wind chimes can make quite beautiful a sound. I have one on my front veranda, it soft tones soothe the mind.
A nice, beauitiful composition indeed... very free flowing and lovely one to relax my mind... good one sir... With loves shan
A poignantly descriptive poem with a lovely lilting rhythm and a memorable chorus. This would be beautiful set to music, Andrew. In a minor key, of course. Your love of words is evident in everything you write. This one is no exception. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Loved this, beautiful images, and a beautiful calm...beautiful.....
Andew, this is a windchime to my heart.. So beautifully you have potrayed this with so many vivid colours and tranquility as only you can master... Very very good my frined.. I love windchimes and have them all over my yard and porches, and I find nothing more tranquil the distant souds of its song... Very good my friend.... Bonnie
Wow I love this Andrew, , was that a windchime I heard whilst reading this? ? I think it was Least, , you have written this so well, , it sure did seem that way Amazing work yet again Andrew .........................................Top marks for a top guy take care...Love duncan X
A dreamscape created by a quality poet. The wind chimes provide that final, timless touch. Lovely... Warmest regards, Sandra
Beautiful poem Andy, I can almost hear the wind chime and it's dreamy melody, well composed, 10 Lynda xx
A beautiful melodic piece that has a kind of olde worlde quality, and a super rythmn and flow that runs throughout. Wind chimes can so often jingle a feeling of peace and contentment. Best Steve
The wind chime played the sweetest song I never shall forget. Verily, nature inspires and influences man a lot. I invite you to read my poems.