Monday, July 27, 2009

Wind Chime Comments

Rating: 5.0

As sun rose in the early dawn
And skies were lit with gold,
I saw the clouds go passing by
And watched my dreams unfold,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

The wind chime played the sweetest song I never shall forget. Verily, nature inspires and influences man a lot. I invite you to read my poems.

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Bob Blackwell 06 August 2009

A lovely poem which has a magic rythmn. Wind chimes can make quite beautiful a sound. I have one on my front veranda, it soft tones soothe the mind.

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Ramesh T A 04 August 2009

Nice free flowing poem to read! Best wishes!

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 August 2009

A nice, beauitiful composition indeed... very free flowing and lovely one to relax my mind... good one sir... With loves shan

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Alison Cassidy 01 August 2009

A poignantly descriptive poem with a lovely lilting rhythm and a memorable chorus. This would be beautiful set to music, Andrew. In a minor key, of course. Your love of words is evident in everything you write. This one is no exception. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Deborah Cromer 01 August 2009

This is beautiful.You have the touch. DC

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Laurie Hill 01 August 2009

Loved this, beautiful images, and a beautiful calm...beautiful.....

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Bonnie Collins 31 July 2009

Andew, this is a windchime to my heart.. So beautifully you have potrayed this with so many vivid colours and tranquility as only you can master... Very very good my frined.. I love windchimes and have them all over my yard and porches, and I find nothing more tranquil the distant souds of its song... Very good my friend.... Bonnie

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Duncan Wyllie 31 July 2009

Wow I love this Andrew, , was that a windchime I heard whilst reading this? ? I think it was Least, , you have written this so well, , it sure did seem that way Amazing work yet again Andrew .........................................Top marks for a top guy take care...Love duncan X

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Ruth Walters 30 July 2009

Wow another brilliant poem! Loved it...well done! Ruthy

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Sandra Fowler 30 July 2009

A dreamscape created by a quality poet. The wind chimes provide that final, timless touch. Lovely... Warmest regards, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 28 July 2009

Beautiful poem Andy, I can almost hear the wind chime and it's dreamy melody, well composed, 10 Lynda xx

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Stephen Stirk 27 July 2009

A beautiful melodic piece that has a kind of olde worlde quality, and a super rythmn and flow that runs throughout. Wind chimes can so often jingle a feeling of peace and contentment. Best Steve

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