Monday, April 27, 2020

Wind And Stones In A Brook Comments

Rating: 5.0

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In the tawny lane carrying
a brook and the river,
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Felix Bongjoh
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2020

Let's trudge after the footprints and sole holes of a brook kissed by stooping lilies lighting a wind's humming path over a river' babbling brook. Really a very fine poem. tony

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Dominic Windram 27 April 2020

Excellent free verse poem Felix...replete with significant metaphors. It's a 10 from me!

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Felix Bongjoh

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Shisong-Bui, Cameroon
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