It tickled me out
Of my ageless somber mood
And disturbed my composed seclusion,
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wonderfully romantic...hi Seema, let him finish the read...10+
hey these are one of your best works..............well done........
And disturbed my composed seclusion, this line is enough to reveal one's emotion and is enough to be understood by the parson when we read your poem we are touched so deep that we were never touched ever before.
Like a fully adorned bride .. It was a nice line..well done. Ramin
the winds of change do change the moods of sensitive souls in diverse ways.. this is always a welcome wind which does such nice things.. a poem of introspection of the inner mirth.. three charecters.. poet, the wind and the person of her affection whom the poet distracts playfully...a technically perfect poem,
'Dressed my naive thought' - superb! All together amazing composition! ......10++++++