Monday, January 30, 2006

Wind ~ ~ ~ Comments

Rating: 4.7

The wind in the bending pines
flushes my thoughts
and clears my mind.
Sitting on this Earth-body
...
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Tara Crown
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shememr 25 September 2020

good mrrrr jobr mer mer

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Chuck Audette 28 April 2006

Very meditative and a bit mystical. Liked the lines 'like a tree without roots I can outstretch my limbs'. -chuck

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Linda Hepner 16 February 2006

You have achieved pleasure here even including that black-winged raven... Linda H

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Scarlett Treat 14 February 2006

The perfection of the moment, the sun on the blade of grass, needing no past and no future! Oh, the bliss of that perfection.

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Mary Nagy 10 February 2006

This has a wonderfully calming feel to it Tara. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

It made me think of Walden. Nice poem.

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Alice Vedral Rivera 30 January 2006

Bewitching description - I have always been entranced by the wind. avr

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Elya Thorn 30 January 2006

very beatiful, so weel written! A++! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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