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The wind is blowing from spring’s nest
Beneath the spring’s nest who saw true love
Of many petals fall on the world’s wall
Our night filled with night itself and pride
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There are beautiful words chosen for this poem, if only they could all rhyme together, it might make more sense. As for this sentence should we broke down the summer's ankle it's should we break: should we + stem. Nevertheless, it's a nice try.
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7/30/2025 9:34:54 PM # 1.0.0
thanks your command, i appreciated your suggestions