Wind Comments

nice to read..survi sgarna..

nice poem and the image created is just awesome one

love your poems very very much heart touching one...

mindblowing and heart sizzling piece of writing a very talented and awesome poem to read

out of that place. [i would write out of place....or...out of its place] intensions, [the spelling is intentions, at least here in u.s.; we do have the word tension(s): aren't languages difficult! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ] AND: am i being a pest? ? as for the last four lines, especially the first two of the last four: the enemy, the wind is a master of uncovering of daintly covering out of my papers like dandelions on a vast field, to blow and disperse the seeds to unknown areas. i'm not familiar with daintly, though i know daintily and dainty. when i typed that preceding sentence my computer unlined daintly in red. and when i googled daintly i was confused by what i read. if you want to know more of what i dislike about those four lines, please ask me. sorry if anybody doesn't like what i just wrote. AS FOR THE CRAFT AND MESSAGE OF THE POEM before the last four lines. i thought it was fantastic. i liked the comparison to a drawer etc. i'm glad a wind blew the poem my way. thanks for sharing. :)

Original write your thoughts can be disclosed by strong winds, just perfect! !

This is an interesting poem with vivid imagery.

Interesting write, novel, and well penned.

the winds of time blow again and again. nice write

great one i love it purely

windy THOUght love the poem by heart

The wind blows the dandelion seeds of stored papers. Beautiful. Thank you.

Original look at the inner mind of self only the strong willed will keep the order from being blown astray...regards

infinite drawer with ideas/ poetic/ good poem! ! ! ! ! ! !

Well, the words of the poets are like seeds for future(so said P.B.Shelley, a revolutionary romantic poet) .I was checking your key; then found a poem.Very interesting one.Please write more.

nice poem di. i like it.