Sunday, May 5, 2013

Win The Battle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Read my words
Hear my voice
Understand in life...
There is a choice.
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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

A choice to grow in life is very important...An inspirational poem..liked it

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Very inspiring and carries great message for all who are really sincere in caring and sharing others...........

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Kanav Justa 10 December 2013

So grow and listen to eachothers voices. Understand the need to accept eachothers choices so true, , , ,

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Unwritten Soul 11 May 2013

We maybe not stand as soldiers but we are in the battlefield to fight the challenge in life, we feel pain but we can still gain..it just about how strong we are inside, we can WIN THE BATTLE Lyn..i like the spirit in you! _Soul

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Ace Of Black Hearts 05 May 2013

Communication is key, because if you don't understand how can you ever begin to try to accept somebody else's choice.

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2013

We can't change the past, but we can mould tomorrow and turn the world into a better place. Very good Lyn.

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David Wood 05 May 2013

Your poem bounds along like a racer. It rhymes and is exciting and doesn't stop for breath. I like it.10/10

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Valsa George 05 May 2013

This message has great relevance at a time when people withdraw to their own narrow shells. Opening up and showing the willingness to listen to and care for others makes life meaningful, no matter we win or lose the battle! Let this message ring from all corners! !

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Very motivational poem, nicely done.

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