Friday, May 19, 2023

Win Over Self... Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sun set and the moon cast its first glimmers,
the lifeless faces began to glow in my eyes,
and the sleeping giant inside of me,
began to pound on the doors of desires.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sandra Feldman 20 May 2023

So magnificently and poetically described! Fantastic and unforgettable, images derived, from this gorgeous poem, so well conceived with great poetic valor and pride. Always, uniquely beautiful writs!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 May 2023

Asim This is brilliantly wonderful Bravo! !

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Marvellous poem Asim ji. How nature plays a masterful game with our senses.......10 + To my Favourite

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Rajan T Renganathan 20 May 2023

Master Stroke, The conflict continued all night, and when the moon finally yielded to the tangerine sun desires slowly gave up their hold on the green grass.

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Ricky M 20 May 2023

It takes one and two to win over the self. Excellent poem 👌 adorable.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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