Wilting lies a dream
In a bed of remorse
Tended not
Pick up your spirits
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iNSIGHTFUL WORK, young lady...Philosophical in nature...and a wee bit on the darkside of the potic Insightful work here, young lady...Your usual philosophical approach maintains, however broadens here into (dare i say) a wee bit of the surreal & darkside....and you won't get any complaints from me, with my 2,000 + works on Death, Dream, and many other assorted darkside themes over the past 3+ years on this site...I like this very much...and you depict very well on this abstruse theme. F j R
This poem is full of mixed feelings And I can see your darker side. Remember that we have two sides in our lives the dar one and the bright one.