Wilted Leaf Comments
A fresh leaf is exposed to hotness,
As summer has kissed the tree,
Green water is evaporated,
Leaf has straddled in scorched path,
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Some leaves though get scorched by the heat temporarily, they will come back to health if properly watered. In the same way, though some lives are drying up, they can be revived and brought back to life with consistent care and self will! Thus there is always hope. Great message!
Let wilted leaf gain greenness soon. A thoughtful write you have presented with great mind.
A wonderful poem full of wisdom. Liked the penultimate stanza. ''Although this leaf is wilted, This has owned.nature.of course. Fire does not burn it at all.''.Brilliant lines from a marvelous poem.10+++
I agree with Mrs Valsa George, that there is so much wisdom in your thoughts; each poem brings something new to the way we perceive life, nature, human heart, spirituality, and all that is necessary for living a human life.
Your spirituality has excelled in this poem Kumar....what to say when I'm wordless...just applause...wish you all the best to go this way...God bless you
This is not immolation, This is not also isolation, A deep austerity is performed, For gaining power and wisdom............................... Wilting and withering in life are essential to gain more spiritual power and wisdom! There is much wisdom in your thoughts Kumaramani sir!
- - - -For gaining power and wisdom, Although this leaf is wilted, This has owned nature of course, Fire does not burn it at all.'- - - - Wonderful poem 10++++++
A poem of wisdom, today humanity is like a wilted leaf in the painful heat of hate and terror. But clouds of love and peace will rise, none can stop these clouds. It will rain and the leaf will be green once again.
A great philosophical and nature write. Gems of wisdom are embedded in this marvelous poem.10
A beautiful poem on summer as well as giving a hope of wisdom. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
The wilted leaf conveys a lot through the cycle of season. Leafs are of different kinds. Leaves that look fresh in summer and leaves that cannot bear the scorching heat of the summer. A wilted leaf awaiting its vitality is beautifully expressed through this poem. Thank you Kumarmani ji for sharing a poem on a leaf.10
A leaf provides the cycle of life season after season. Wilted leaf undergoes color changes and falls to mingle into nature. New leaves bring new life. Beautifully presented.
VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM ABOUT LEAVES IN HEAT STILL ON TREES THIRSTY LIKE ME
Sir, your poem reflects the rhythmic cycle and beauty of nature. It is true for our life too. It tells us the link between life and nature. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem with us.........10 Chandan
This is not immolation, This is not also isolation, A deep austerity is performed, For gaining power and wisdom, - Summer has constant gales to blow off the green leaves, but that does not make us feel depressed because we know there will be plenty of green leaves around us. A good poem about the grand nature.
Oh, the fire prince is meditating, No fire or no sun is burning, Only wilted leaf this is, But waiting to regain greenness....beautifully expressed! A sparkling piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)
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Orison is offered to recover, ...From erosion of natural agents. Beautiful lines we love to read. Wilted leaf has still dream to have lead in its branches.