Monday, May 11, 2009

Wilted Blossoms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whipping boy of Victorian days.
Weeping lonely Silent prays.
Lordship has the gift of youth.
Dies an rises that uncouth.
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Yasmin Khan 07 May 2013

The poem is strewn with befitting words to enhance the theme, The title is symbolic and suggestive. Some lines have deft alliterations. It's a nice composition.

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rago rago 11 May 2009

a beutiful write............crush a bone and pulp the flesh in time shall geal to steely mesh......... fantastic lines to ponder on........

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