Willow (Revised) Comments

It is all gorgeous with wonderful lines and amazing descriptive images. The willow tree for me too is simply a tree that deserves heart felt beautiful writing. Karin Anderson 10/10

Masterfully penned, brilliant expression and wonderful imagery... Great work...

Wonderful poem with a classic feel. Well done. Jim

Dearest Mr Pablo, It was a joy to read this magnificent poem of yours. You used excellent imagery all throughout this poem and revealed it's multiple meanings to readers. Your word choice are good, but don't really carry any flow; however, the great thing is that you used your talent to paint a picture, a scene o this very poem and made it come alive right before my eyes. Other than the flow, you did an excellent job. Why do you ask me, a 15 year old student to comment on a 46 year old man's poem, when you would very likely be much better than I. It is an honor to be asked to comment on your poem(s) . Please do continue writing... God bless, Jake

Dear Mr Pablo, I liked the poem for its exquisite imagery and double meaning words holding the audience spellbound e.g.'shawl arms to earth', 'waldz we share', 'emerald gown', 'steadfast unveilings'and ''whose heart to fall by wisp of glance'.To me it's an ode to a beau dancing on the willow floor. Great Pablo. Carry on -Rajkumar-10

Your imagination is very much high, which is reflected in this poem well.

Small poem.....massive ideas! ! keep it up...Merna

Free flowing poem makes one free to read with pleasure! Fine!

Sweet and nice lines dear Pablo 10

i get two different images in this write. one is the beauty of the willow tree the other is of a woman trying to regain a love lost good write

I thought of an elegant lady on a dance floor.

we are still covered with snow here. I cant wait to see the weeping willow soon...lovely image.

Pablo Mark Slaughter says there are fantastic images. 'Shawl arms to earth in gentle touch'. It is very beautiful, encompassing nature and romance. Karin Anderson

Hi Pablo There are some fantastic images in this poem - I can see the willow spilling over and caressing the ground. Lovely piece.10 from me. Mark

Very eloquent. You are a fine imagist.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra

Another poem that captures the heart - I love the image of the willow Pablo...10+++

Wonderful poem.................very nice write about tree.......every lines transfer you to new plane of existence..........10+++

great thoughts on the willow tree...interesting...the layers of meaning unfold as you read through each line

i am always attracted to a willow tree.Somehow it shows its dignity and power.That's why, i was attracted to the title..Your write did its justice..A very, very nice write. Hugs, meggie

Interestin write good poem great thoughts went in there good work