Williams' Love Comments

Sorry for this one i didn't agree with you. Even i'm too young from you but i think love that you have described is not love. It is not real... you have just played with her feeling.. not an honest love.. coz not it's not just love.... Love is something precious and we should respect for love... I speak in the name of LOVE it selve... I know if you use your feeling not only brain

Very apt description of love David, and wrapped in lovely flow. Well done.

I like the way you ended this. I always pay a lot of attention to the beginning of a written piece, because that's the most important and the hardest to get right for some reason. So, naturally, I don't usually get to the end. In this case, your beginning was very good. Your ending, was better. I can't say the same about the middle. But, hey, nobody ever remembers the middle; if you get the others right. GW62