Sunday, May 29, 2016

William Wallace Comments

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An Ode To William Wallace and His Love....

When first he saw her he was ten,
she was eight years old back then.
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Annette Aitken
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Tom Billsborough 31 March 2017

Scots Wha hae wi' Wallace Bled! I've often played the song. You've made a beautiful poem about a Great Scot and his tragic early life. It's a very sad but lovely Ode.

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Bri Edwards 17 October 2016

they wed in seceret, ...........is seceret a resort's name? ha ha this stanza: For noble men away back then, had the right to purge in spite. By law they were the first to soil virgin brides who tried to hide. They desecrate their wedding vows for vengances they would mar that night to show who's countries rule was right.................. .............................this stanza befuddled me at first. then i believe recalled reading once that e.g. a king could be the one to deflower (or otherwise have sexual relations with) a new bride even though she was NOT his bride! true? if so, no wonder so many wished to be king (or did they?) ! of course i would oppose the rule, but maybe it was a more sure way of ensuring an heir to the king's throne, rather than depend on the queen to 'deliver' a son. ============================= regarding the character William Wallace in the movie Braveheart: [from Wikipedia]: Plot In 1280, King Edward Longshanks (Patrick McGoohan) invades and conquers Scotland following the death of Alexander III of Scotland, who left no heir to the throne. Young William Wallace (James Robinson) witnesses Longshanks' treachery, survives the deaths of his father (Sean Lawlor) and brother (Sandy Nelson) , and is taken abroad on a pilgrimage throughout Europe by his paternal Uncle Argyle (Brian Cox) , where he is educated. Years later, Longshanks grants his noblemen land and privileges in Scotland, including Prima Nocte. Meanwhile, a grown Wallace (Mel Gibson) returns to Scotland and falls in love with his childhood friend Murron MacClannough (Catherine McCormack) , and the two marry in secret. Wallace rescues Murron from being raped by English soldiers, but as she fights off their second attempt, Murron is captured and publicly executed. In retribution, Wallace leads his clan to slaughter the English garrison in his hometown and send the occupying garrison at Lanark back to England ===================================== bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Ha thought about her every night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Terry Craddock 12 June 2016

Hollywood Romance Silver Screen Images the power of words love scenes in a movie brave hearts seize ardently forbidden love with indomitable strength in merging souls star crossed lovers sudden tragic death parted eternally linked in purity testing time eternity Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'William Wallace' by the poet Annette Aitken. Dedicated to the poet Annette Aitken.

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Amitabho Sengupta 08 June 2016

Nice one. Good execution.

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Terry Craddock 07 June 2016

the power of words scenes in a movie, brave hearts seize forbidden love, with indomitable strength in souls, star crossed lovers death parted, eternally linked in pure love souls another brilliant poem Annette 10+++ :)

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