Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Will You, Will You? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will you help me stay alive?
Will you save my soul tonight?
Will you help me for get those painful nights, when i cried out for help &
no one came near my side.
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gohar sana
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Gohar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 April 2008

I found this to be very special and moving. I'm selecting it as a favorite. I gave it a ten. It was my heart that did these things. GW62

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Wali Jamali 17 April 2008

True expression of melancholy and desperation.

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Abha Sharma 17 April 2008

lot of pain spills out of these lines...written with true sentiment..

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Don Mathews 10 April 2008

Very Very nice indeed.

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Farzana Fathima 10 April 2008

emotion holding...nice feelingss

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