........Will You Wait There For Me Too? ..... Comments

Ohohoho! I will tell him to wait for you :) 10+

I love these simple lines ... if someone can show his heart to his beloved as simple as you did in your poem hmmm! ! ! ! ! 10.. Ali

'I am waiting there for you Will you wait there for me too? ' Simple and melodiou,10 added to it.

don't wait let the love touch ur lover, , don't keep it in ur heart. i know it will be great love in paradise, but it is diffirent love in reallife. nice poem dear hataw :) cheers Timon

Hmmm, nice Interesting again...good write

Beautiful poem brava Keep that type of love in your heart it will lead you to better places

For that kind of love, He would be mad not wait until the end of time for you... Fatima 10