Sunday, January 25, 2009

Will You Stay With Me? Comments

Rating: 4.8

I saw a couple walking by
fighting with each other
The noise made some sparrow cry
my heart was painfully bothered
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Ken Suh
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Crystal Torres 05 February 2009

WOW! ! ! ! i loved see if any guy could come up with somethin like this well wow i mean its GREAT and i have no problem giving it a 10 and btw i just love the way u spoke ur feeling through out the whole thing! !

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 27 January 2009

I can see a caring mind in you. Keep writing. All the best

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Tess Bybee 26 January 2009

This good, and I think it's well thought out. Good job.

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Kayla Martinez 26 January 2009

ken suh. this is a marvelous piece of work you got here. the person that is to receive this is a lucky one. i hope the both of you much happiness.

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Natalie Rosario 26 January 2009

awww so nice love it this is perfect to give to ruth she would love it i know i would she would be crazy not to love this poem

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Katy White 25 January 2009

OMG! ! ! I loved it... I gave it a 10! ! !

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Eyan Desir 25 January 2009

nice work i voted it a 10

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Eyan Desir 25 January 2009

nice work i voted it a 10

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