I saw a couple walking by
fighting with each other
The noise made some sparrow cry
my heart was painfully bothered
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I can see a caring mind in you. Keep writing. All the best
ken suh. this is a marvelous piece of work you got here. the person that is to receive this is a lucky one. i hope the both of you much happiness.
awww so nice love it this is perfect to give to ruth she would love it i know i would she would be crazy not to love this poem
WOW! ! ! ! i loved see if any guy could come up with somethin like this well wow i mean its GREAT and i have no problem giving it a 10 and btw i just love the way u spoke ur feeling through out the whole thing! !