Will you promise
To bring the stars at my feet
Will you promise
To embrace all my chaos at times
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I don't think your lover can fulfil your first condition but he may do the last one if is true lover who has made such promise. A wonderful love poem!
Yes ma'am i believe on these words. When you make a promise do keep it. That's it. Your poem is reminding me all promises i ever made and whether i really remain loyal to them or not. Into my favourite.
Great poem, magnificently rendered. the picture added is loveliest too. Enjoyed reading this time and again! 5 Stars! To my favourites.