Will You Promise? Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Will You Promise?

Rating: 4.8


Will you promise
To bring the stars at my feet
Will you promise
To embrace all my chaos at times
Will you promise
To stay by me when my frailties increase
Will you promise
To esteem me when I am raucous and wrecked
Will you promise
To love me more and more as the time passes
Will you promise
To lift my spirits when I am low with all the doubts
Will you promise
To visit my grave often when I am dead and gone.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Will You Promise?
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Promises are for keeps. Never ever take it for granted.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2021

Great poem, magnificently rendered. the picture added is loveliest too. Enjoyed reading this time and again! 5 Stars! To my favourites.

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Kostas Lagos 23 January 2021

Promises of lovers, promises everlasting. Great poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2021

I don't think your lover can fulfil your first condition but he may do the last one if is true lover who has made such promise. A wonderful love poem!

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

Yes ma'am i believe on these words. When you make a promise do keep it. That's it. Your poem is reminding me all promises i ever made and whether i really remain loyal to them or not. Into my favourite.

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