Friday, October 9, 2020

Will You Not Come? Comments

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I always bring a frightened mind with me,
There is lack of many things
Now my purse is very frail
And the drum of rice is almost empty
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dipak adhya
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Varsha M 09 October 2020

Nothing is certain and static Even mighty people are shaken Often a wise move at every step Makes the rest of life best... The truth shine only in dark days The persistent is the real one... A reflective poetry. Will you not come? ... Thll

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Khairul Ahsan 09 October 2020

The poem is okay but there is, perhaps, an 'e' missing in the last word of the caption.

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