Friday, July 9, 2021

Will You Marry Me? Comments

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My income, home, car, and caste—all are small.
Would you still like to marry me, my doll?
If yes, I promise I will treat you as a queen
And gift you floral crowns and earrings green.
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Sahil Sharifdin Bhat
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Mehvish sanaie 10 July 2021

Awe! I am so glad to encourage you.You have such a powerful way with words.An innate talent.And you are one of the poets i would elect for showing the most growth of any on this site.....Dashing poem...Keep it up....❤

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M Asim Nehal 10 July 2021

Nice poem to promote self in love. I liked it

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 July 2021

A poem about Love, loveliest put and worded. Crystal clear composure. I have enjoyed your fascinating words.Thank you so much!

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Quaid-Uz- Zaman 09 July 2021

A beautiful poem nicely composed. Thanks a lot!

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