Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Will You Love Me Till The End Of Time? Comments

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will you love me till the end of time?
for better or for worse
knowing that your mine?
i'll always put you first...
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Saane Pahulu
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Jean Dament 15 September 2009

A sweet, love poem that was nicely done. You have a few errors here though. In the title you forgot the 'e' in end. Not sure what word you meant to use in the line 'we'll never lose the foght' (fight?)

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