Will You Love Me Then? Comments

'Two perfect individuals is what we are not' - not that withstanding, 'I'll still see your shadow when eyes grow dim Feel your tender touch at each and every whim Basking in the warmth of your gentle embrace Loving you ever none can never take your place' - so heavenly, so sublime! Your poem gets a 10 from me.

This one really touched me for I am in that old category.You did a beautiful job on this one.Just splendid penning here

What I believe, true love once it's formed and realized, it is immortal, it never dies. We may die because of ur mortality and uncertainty, but that love what was once formed will never die. It becomes more and more well bonded and closer to closest. Thanks for sharing this poem.

'I'll still see your shadow when eyes grow dim Feel your tender touch at each and every whim.......' Lovely poem Patricia, Enjoyed reading it.

Love grows more as one grows old. The intimacy keeps life more interesting. What one feels I am sure the partner feels the same. You expressed the feelings and the expectations beautifully in a lovely poems. Thank you.

A superb poem well written, compact with feelings and verses rhyme. You have captured the kind of love that outlast age and life. A lovely poem to treasure. Score 10.

Beautifully written with the wonder of it all.....Thanks for sharing!

Beautiful and definitely a question wondered by everyone who falls in love~ Yet, we never know what tomorrow holds~ Loved this poem and the wonder it conveys. Thanks!

Age is not a n obstacle for love. Growing older does not separate from love. Somethings are hidden but well felt on mutual understanding. Loving for each one is amazing and nice at all times. Interesting and nice poem shared......10