Friday, May 24, 2013

Will You Love Me Then Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will thou love me come the'morrow
As you did in yesteryear,
For my heart is full of sorrow;
Tell me, tell me, my sweet dear.
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Joseph Anderson
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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

beautifully written Joseph. and I am sure she will love you forever. a sweet read

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Walterrean Salley 30 June 2013

Absolutely beautiful, and such a pleasure to read. PS: I've written one with the same title. If you find time, please check it out. Thanks.

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John Brown 13 June 2013

Beautiful poem Joseph. The flesh is indeed weak, but the spirit is indestructible.

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Amira Remadna 03 June 2013

Yuuppiiiiiiii dont worry grandpa she will always love you

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Patricia Grantham 02 June 2013

I agree with this very lovely write Joe. As we all grow older and we surely will our outlook on love itself should get better. Eyesight may dim and miss every whim, Walking may be slow as we all know, love may grow old but still stands bold. Love never fails. Oh how I love thee let me count the ways. These words are a womans dream. Made my heart flutter. Truly enjoyed.

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Ken E Hall 31 May 2013

Sure she will love thee for you are nice with words to boot and luvli thoughts too.uavaniceday...uavaniceday

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David Wood 30 May 2013

Love is sweet what ever time of life we have. A very lovely poem Jo.

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Hans Vr 28 May 2013

Joseph, you touched here on the essentials of love. Being IN love is infatuation that comes and goes but Love (without the 'in') is something completely different. It is the lovely things we do for each other and the feeling follows.The more we give in such a 'LOVE' the more we get. You wrote here in very melodious words and in excellent rhyme one of the fantastic aspects of true love. Excllent work, Joseph, very inspiring.

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R.j. Wynn 25 May 2013

Joe, this is awesome bud, look at all these darlings below me wooing you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 May 2013

Aha sir dis is an adorable poem in lovely rhyme n if u ask yor love im sure she had find dis equally endearing. U can read mine too mayb u had like one.

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Valsa George 25 May 2013

Ageing love is equally beautiful as the twilight hues and the pastel shade of the evening! ! There is a youthful lover in you sir and age hasn't dialuted or impaired it a bit! A wonderful love song! !

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Valerie Dohren 24 May 2013

Simply beautiful Joseph - love it, my kinda write! ! Definitely a 10.

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