Friday, July 24, 2015

Will You Love Me The Same? Comments

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I sat in the quietness on one starry night,
Away from the noise and the city lights.
Eyes closed and lost in thoughts.
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Esther Hadassah Sendeza
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2019

I am dying to know, Will you love me the same? a cry from the depths........ love is a mystery. the need to be loved is sooo great. fine expressions. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2019

When everything falls apart, And we have no words to say. When the rain is not falling but pouring instead, .. will you love me the same? l ove, need to know about.. certainty and surety in love........ very well portrayed dear poetess. thank u. tony

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Daniel Brick 26 July 2015

You ask the question WILL YOU LOVE ME THE SAME? twice, but the poem doesn't contain an answer! (But your prose comment seems to provide a positive answer.) That put me in an anxious mood because the imagery also got increasingly stormy. The first description is a quiet, withdrawn mood. In the second the stars don't shine, and in the third the rain pours. So you are not giving us any easy answers to our doubts about the course of love. That made me realize I have to provide whatever certainty I can, it's got to come from within, because out there it's storming, and things are falling apart.

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