Wednesday, August 12, 2009

! Will You...Hmn...Will You? Comments

Rating: 2.9

If I am there beside you, will you hold my hand,
kiss it with tender grace and with eyes that comprehend?
Will you touch my hair that fall on my cheeks
swept by air in perfume scent and fix?
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Gerard Heijink 13 August 2009

Oo Honey ko, Pakakasalan kita, ... Kailan tayo magpapakasal?

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Ted M 13 August 2009

Vow! the romance and the passion highlighted so nicely in the lovely choice of words. You make things sound so beautiful, whatever it is you want to say. Nice, creative and effective.....10+++

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~*Nezra*~ Farrell 12 August 2009

I really like the first line :) It reminds me and my baby!

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Graham Russell 12 August 2009

such tenderness.. such passion it makes me weep for loves caressing hand.. :)

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 12 August 2009

A very sensitive poem expressed through romantic sensuality. Full of mood and 'thirst' for love. Nice poem

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