If I am there beside you, will you hold my hand,
kiss it with tender grace and with eyes that comprehend?
Will you touch my hair that fall on my cheeks
swept by air in perfume scent and fix?
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Vow! the romance and the passion highlighted so nicely in the lovely choice of words. You make things sound so beautiful, whatever it is you want to say. Nice, creative and effective.....10+++
I really like the first line :) It reminds me and my baby!
such tenderness.. such passion it makes me weep for loves caressing hand.. :)
A very sensitive poem expressed through romantic sensuality. Full of mood and 'thirst' for love. Nice poem
Oo Honey ko, Pakakasalan kita, ... Kailan tayo magpapakasal?