Thursday, July 4, 2013

Will You God Please? Comments

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Oh my God my God
I am only a paper boat
That flows along
The turbulent waves of sadness
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
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Dinesan Madathil 08 July 2013

Ha ha.... you are there at least to float as a paper boat. What can God do who cannot save himself from the currents of reason and invalidation these times? Have you seen his tears? It`s my stand Jayan... leave it Enjoyed the lines well.

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Shahzia Batool 04 July 2013

Truly confessional and earnest supplication, a humble one, emerging from one's own person and encompassing the humanity: Oh I look inside me only Why not I look the world Through my eyes Let God bless the sobbing world the imagery of paper boat and turbulent waves of sadness is the apt imagery... it is said of prayer, one should always think of others first, God likes selflessness...

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