Monday, May 4, 2009

Will You Deny? ? ? Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wana make your life colourful,
I wana make your life meaningful

Wish to eradicate all nights of blue,
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Katiee Clements 16 May 2009

I have to admit, you are really good at this =] i love the things you write. x

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

I can see those beautiful colours of the rainbow in your poem awesome write--keep sharing anjali

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Maitreyee Joshi 08 May 2009

a beautiful expression of a woman's heart's cravings.

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Hiding Nothing 07 May 2009

This poem was okay but tried to hard to ryhme stealing focus from the beautiful story you were trying to present.8/10

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Tara this is a lovely poem. I always love color in poetry and yours vibrates with your words. Thank you 10/10

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rago rago 05 May 2009

nice and eloquent flow of lines.........very nice read.

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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2009

Gentle swaying lines, paint your soul on the page my dear friend, written very well indeed

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James Mclain 05 May 2009

Your flow is quite as the softly moving sand, it gently pulls you in, loves color flash, snapped in you, of each fresh day with one found smile.....iip

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Juahta Sitepu 05 May 2009

it's a simple mind poem but rich in meaning, i like it, i wanna make your life colorful i wanna make your life meaningful and i wanna make your life mine. nice work!

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a beautiful ending poem with rainbow colors all the way..well done tara

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Joseph Poewhit 04 May 2009

Poem has a playful way about it

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