Will You Deny? ? ? Comments

I have to admit, you are really good at this =] i love the things you write. x

I can see those beautiful colours of the rainbow in your poem awesome write--keep sharing anjali

a beautiful expression of a woman's heart's cravings.

This poem was okay but tried to hard to ryhme stealing focus from the beautiful story you were trying to present.8/10

Tara this is a lovely poem. I always love color in poetry and yours vibrates with your words. Thank you 10/10

nice and eloquent flow of lines.........very nice read.

Gentle swaying lines, paint your soul on the page my dear friend, written very well indeed

Your flow is quite as the softly moving sand, it gently pulls you in, loves color flash, snapped in you, of each fresh day with one found smile.....iip

it's a simple mind poem but rich in meaning, i like it, i wanna make your life colorful i wanna make your life meaningful and i wanna make your life mine. nice work!

a beautiful ending poem with rainbow colors all the way..well done tara

Poem has a playful way about it