Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Will You Be There Sone? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will you be there Sone,
When desolateness & loneliness sweeps
and my shoulders bend in defeat
lift my spirits and give some solace
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Seema Jayaraman
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Melvina Germain 05 December 2015

This is absolutely beautiful Seema.....

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 29 September 2015

Seema, WONDERFUL work! ! ! What you have told is correct....To comfort, to lean, to guide, to care, to encourage and to share somebody should be there in our life...Otherwise our world is a vacuum! 10/10

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Seema Jayaraman 29 September 2015

Thanks Mallika

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Valsa George 26 September 2015

I assume that Sone must be your bosom friend or a much loved one who you hope will never betray you in adversity, instead remain as a pillar of strength and support when you falter on your way or when you have to bear the heavy yoke of life on your shoulders! A very poignant write!

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Seema Jayaraman 26 September 2015

Don't we all carry a secret Sone in our hearts, to fall back on, to rest a lil while, to simply hold hands and watch the seasons fly..: -) ..thank you M'am

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 September 2015

Expecting a powerful friend in adversity of life is a nice idea it seems and a good poem it is felt.

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