Thursday, January 7, 2016

Will You? Comments

Rating: 4.7

Will you love me when I'm old and gray?
when my hairline is receding?
will you flee or will you stay,
when Viagra I'll be needing?
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dave lessard
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Jak Black 17 January 2016

An enjoyable, humorous, read, Dave. Reminded me of the song 'When I'm sixty four' by the Beatles.

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Lorraine Colon 16 January 2016

Poignant questions that we hope will be answered with a resounding YES. True love is not concerned with our physical decay. Love does not criticize or condemn the inevitable decline brought on by the years, and certainly cannot abandon the worn-out shells and ignore the loving spirit dwelling within. This is a touching poem, Dave, voicing the concerns of so many of us.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 January 2016

Nicely narrated poem....thanx for sharing :)

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