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The rising sun has yet to glow
In his resplendent glory,
The moon has not even begun her descent
But I’m here on the shore,
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So what if I commented before. A question and poem like this cannot be answered or commented on in one try. It reads even better during the second helping. Well done Anjali.
Sweet and beautiful poem soaked in tender feelings of love. I wonder how you put that intensity in such a small piece! 10+
U write beautiful love poems and this is one of those poems which may make anyone believe that u hv written the poem for him... like the Buddha statue of Ajanta and Ellora which looks at everyone who gazes at it from any side... lovely poem really. U excel in writing love poems... Sure. not a word extra. believe me.
Loaded with love that leaps over ever limitation into the limitless light of the sun and moon. Well done my friend 10+
the ever romantic Anjali with all her despondency and refinement. well done! ! ! 10++
Beautiful romantic poem. Showered with wonderful words Enjoyed reading it. 10+
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The [poem started beautifully but I thought it somewhat lost its way at the end which doesn't really create an impact. However, it is a charming poem still.
Dicky birds pair for life and with words like this I'm sure it will be the same for you Luvli poem for the man of your life++++++10 regards......
wonderful is a word that fells short to praise ur poetry... 10 to the power millions hearts
amazed me.. your lovely way in choosing your words gives you an especial way to write your feelings as well and to open it so lovely.. you have your way and you can dive and swim through your feelings.. so beautiful my dear sweet great poet.. hazem al..
Sweeping flow....gud use of words and nice relativities...1000 ++++ marks
I love the setting portrayed in the first stanza. The way it supports the second stanza is wonderful. I really love short poems like this. A fantastic write!
one of your ealier ones nicely written.... slow as the moon glow very beautiful imagery cheers
A beautiful poem..the emotions are beautifully expressed through the poem.
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7/22/2025 9:56:34 PM # 1.0.0
I have added this poem to my list of poems!