Wednesday, June 3, 2009

! Will Try... Comments

Rating: 5.0

In trying to find the perfect words
to describe how I feel about you,
I forgot to listen.
In trying to write the perfect lines,
...
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Nkululeko Mdudu
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Nkululeko Mdudu. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bob Blackwell 03 June 2009

You have the gift for words, b y trying to be yourself, you should gain the gift of love. Great poem. 10++

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Joseph Poewhit 03 June 2009

Like taking the mask off and seeing love in reality.

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Marieta Maglas 03 June 2009

''I will forget about appearances, and try to be authentic'' We do not have to be perfect in order to be able to love it.. very true..10++

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Nkululeko Mdudu

Nkululeko Mdudu

Queenstown/ South Africa
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