Friday, November 12, 2021

Will They Win? Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the crest
Of a wave
The Surfer sped,
Hoping
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Sandra Feldman
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Powerfully presented. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

A powerful poem. Incisive and well expressed. Let us not allow evil runs our life. We must fight for our basic and fundamental rights. We must fight those evils.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 November 2021

Sometimes life is unfair. The truth will not always win. Yet, there will be a time when people will rise in unity and defeat the evil that makes life unbearable. Those who make a mockery on justice, equality and freedom will later on pay for their misdeeds and crime.

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Soran M. H 13 November 2021

The poet poses an essential question in the conclusion and makes the reader a part of the game, but the struggles of life continue and the truth does not always triumph

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Soran M. H 13 November 2021

Think about it! And you? Will you let them Win.

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Soran M. H 13 November 2021

The bad fight Lying, abusing Killing all Kindness With all their might, Spreading Evil And Fright!

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