Will There Ever Be An Escape For Me Comments

Suffering is inspiration for a poet. You may like to read my poem, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks

They say that ' a problem shared is a problem halved '......this poem is from the soul.... Keep on writing!

Alicia, please re-read and edit this poem. There is no issue with the repetition at the start of each line. This is an established and recognised poetic form of embellishment. However, the typo's have used everY, twice...... I might consider breaking the last two lines into three.... Danny.

I think this writing is great extremely dark and filled with sadness, your emotions spread fluently and are all there. Life is only as beautiful as you want to make it, I can sense a strong feeling of emptiness in the chasm of your heart but you will never be alone find the beauty in your own reality and maybe then you will release that suffering inside.

You're fatigued from prolonged suffering, young woman. But you should take a look around and decide to enjoy the scenery as this desert you're in is not boundless and cannot hold you captive forever.

It is only temporary. That's all I can really say. This poem comes from deeply endowed emotion. Until you decide that it is not somebody who will rescue you; That it is in fact you. Yourself. You will never find escape. A beautifully true and sincere write. I hope you see the end of the tunnel Alicia. And the light it gives way to